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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Evenings twilight hues Crowned in majestic purple Beckons twinkling stars Glowing embers fade Surrendering to to the night Shadow kingdoms reign [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 08-25-2000).] |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
And thus Bright Days reign Superceeded by the Night Shall work a return. Changing of the Guard Bright Colors to Midnight Blue March in Royal style. Very good Dennis- you've really help make this a Haiku Heaven! David |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You both are soooo good at these!  Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 08-26-2000).] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
OOoohh, I do love how you used the glorious colors for my mind's eye to look upon. Just beautiful. Love, Marcy |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Sun bows to the moon in her royal purple robes majestic stars shine Royal blue is her throne as she rules her nights kingdom her crown of starlight Wonderful, oh royal King of Haiku! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
These a wonderful, just perfect |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
It's interesting that I posted my reply before the poem was started |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Just so beautiful Dennis, what lovely images you pen with so few words. Looks like you and David and Ellie are the Three Haikuteers, they are all great. Bonnie |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dennis- As usual, these are great...really beautiful. I like them a lot. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Couldn't have done beter myself |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Ya' really do it well ! LOL @ Bonnie - Three Haikuteers'  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dennis, It's even lovlier now than when I read it, ...........quoting lakewalker....... "before it was written"! O'LOL, O'LOL,. LOL!!! Get him back Dennis!! so funny!! |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Dennis, Well done ! I also enjoyed the senryu written in response. INclan |
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