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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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The world is empty to my view, landscapes are dull and dirty grey, sunrise distorted and askew, the evening hours my heart's dismay. So quickly do the fortunes turn, crumbled in a heated rush, cruel searing pain in waves do burn, angry intent the soul does crush. Not distant in my love's sweet past, a kindred heart embraced in kind, swore fiercely that her love would last, abruptly now expunged from mind. Cold empty arms in lonely stance, deep ache to bear, no time to mourn, all hope denied, no second chance, foul ashes do my lips adorn. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It's hard when those dreams die. Very well written! Denise |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Peg, The pain feels all too real--well conveyed in the mournful dirge of a love that's lost forever. A well written piece. David |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is very well done! Cold empty arms in lonely stance, deep ache to bear, no time to mourn, all hope denied, no second chance, foul ashes do my lips adorn. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Denise, David, Lakewalker..thanks for your response.. after Lady in the Lake I was beginning to wonder...LOL..yes, the pain is real my friends, sorry to say.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
hmmm. how did this wind up on the second page?..lol the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Pegasus, so sad and a touching write...chanson~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pegasus~ Sharing the pain is a good thing. Well done, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Chanson, Marge, thank you. I needed that the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Pegasus; You are so very talented at writing these romantic and lovely poems, even tho this one is so sad. Broken hearts do heal and are stronger for it, thus able to love again. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
thank you, Ellie..maybe I should lighten up once in a while, eh?...  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
i found it wonderfully poetic. it was a great poem and i enjoyed the rhyming. lotsa people think of silly things so they can rhyme but you didn't have to...good work "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
rich-pa, thanks for the read. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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