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Butterfly Kisses - Haiku |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA ![]() |
A Butterfly kiss on the rose petal soft cheek of a new born babe Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, This is so sweet and tender, a precious captured moment! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear Ellie, oohhh, this is soo sweet and gentle. A perfectly lovely Haiku. Love, Marcy |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh what a beautiful image this brought to my mind Ellie. Such a tender little piece, you are a Haiku Queen. Bonnie |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
oops, looks like i better type this fast and get out, for i wont want to spoil this unique tender moment ![]() |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Ellie it doesn't get anymore lovely than this. What a beautiful image you have given me.~~~ Sigh ~~~ Juls |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
this one is delicious! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
These are some beautiful thoughts you've put into my mind with this one ![]() |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhh, this is precious, Ellie! Denise |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Airborne masterpiece So gently it now descends Perfect soft touch down! Yes, yes- Beauty in motion- beauty in writing- and I second Bonnie's motion - you Are a Haiku Queen! David |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lovely! regards, sudhir |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
A beautiful scented haiku. Like the others said, a lovely image which brings such sweet feelings to mind... ![]() |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Ellie - I love this, I do! So sweet and beautiful! ![]() Take care, Melissa~ |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
How beautiful!! ![]() |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
ellie you amaze me every piece you write so beautiful ![]() Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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