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Butterfly Kisses - Haiku |
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
A Butterfly kiss on the rose petal soft cheek of a new born babe Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, This is so sweet and tender, a precious captured moment! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear Ellie, oohhh, this is soo sweet and gentle. A perfectly lovely Haiku. Love, Marcy |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh what a beautiful image this brought to my mind Ellie. Such a tender little piece, you are a Haiku Queen. Bonnie |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
oops, looks like i better type this fast and get out, for i wont want to spoil this unique tender moment |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Ellie it doesn't get anymore lovely than this. What a beautiful image you have given me.~~~ Sigh ~~~ Juls |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
this one is delicious! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
These are some beautiful thoughts you've put into my mind with this one |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhh, this is precious, Ellie! Denise |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Airborne masterpiece So gently it now descends Perfect soft touch down! Yes, yes- Beauty in motion- beauty in writing- and I second Bonnie's motion - you Are a Haiku Queen! David |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lovely! regards, sudhir |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
A beautiful scented haiku. Like the others said, a lovely image which brings such sweet feelings to mind... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Ellie - I love this, I do! So sweet and beautiful! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
How beautiful!! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
ellie you amaze me every piece you write so beautiful Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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