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Butterfly Haiku |
Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Fragile winged beauties Kaleidoscopic colors Butterfly ballet! Wafting on a breeze Graceful, fluttering delight Flower garden mimes! Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dennis, Whoowee, loved the butterfly ballet, wafting on a breeze! Soft, colorful, serene. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I can see the bright wings fluttering over streams and pastel stones in my imaginary garden...enjoyed a lot by me! Joy |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Dennis; What a delightful gift you have created! These are beyond loveliness, truly. twin butterflies of delight! Love, Sis 02 |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
dennis! these are great! "mimes" and "ballets"... wonderful words to put with butterflies!! may be my favorites so far will have to send these to my mom..she's got a butterfly fetish..! dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Dennis, this is volumes said in few words!! Beauties your haikus are but fragile they are most definitely NOT! i see there are some haikus that i havent replied to yet...rest assured my friend that i will let them see daylight again |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Dennis! I love these! Denise |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
How very lovely this is...sooo colorful and bright!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wow Dennis! U painted a beautiful picture with ur words! *S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Dennis, you must know how much I love butterflies?! and your haikus are gorgeous dedications to these winged miracles! Wonderful work! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh the last line was simply wonderful! Great haiku! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I don't see many butterfiles, so thanks for sharing the imagary Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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