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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Gentle maiden full of love Thou to me didst come like an angel sent from above Thou open'd thine heart and bade me to come in Giving me this peace within On wings of love didst thou come Coming on morns first light with the rising of the sun Singing with sweetest voice Heaven's gentlest song Knowing that for it I longed Gentle maiden, tarry I pray Stay with mine heart till cometh the new day And when thou depart again to thy home Then true love I will have known ------------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This should be read with some Shakespearean music in the background. It's a good one!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Just lovely are your thoughts. Such a pleasure always to read the beautiful pouring forth of your romantic phrases. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful work, Sven! Congrats on the 2996 posts! May I ask why you picked that number? Elizabeth |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sven this is truly a masterpiece. This Gentle and Angelic Maiden must be very proud. Stunning work my friend and many congrats on your way to 3000. Juls |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Great writing romantic and sweet.  Great piece. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
I feel this poem but now sit stuck on the last two lines. Sigh! Good writing! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you my friends. . . deVine, just a minute. . . let me break out my lute!!  Marge, thank you my friend, you are far too kind. . . Elizabeth, just thought that I'd do a countdown to my 3,000th in Open! There are 3 more, one in Dark, in Spiritual, and in Adult. . . thank you!! juliet, thank you my friend. . . keleith, thank you!! Honey Bunch, the last two eh? Thank you my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sven, now you know that I just can't resist reading your poetry. And as always I am glad that I did, this is beautiful, full of devotion and romance. Yep, Shakespeare's got nothin' on you sir Sven! Your heart and mind are amazing!Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Sven this is so beauiful "Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish" ~ |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Sven your poetry is soft and serene...very nice to read. Jon |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Sven, this is a beautiful piece. I love the structure, only you could pull that off. I can't wait to see 3000! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
an honor to post in the same forum, my poetic friend..excellent.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, you give me far too much credit!! Thank you my friend. . . Maria, thank you so much! Jon, thank you as well my friend. . . Lovebug, thanks, don't know that I'm the only one that could pull it off though!! pegasus, the honor is all mine. . .thank you my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Very beautiful indeed... marcymay you find your heart's desires may your soul be lifted up caressed with the boldness of His touch a love that compares to none other |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Sven! Congratulations on 3,000, too! Denise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Beautiful writing. Wow, five posts in five forums . . . you have been busy!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Writings of a true Knight...... You write these ones so beautifully. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marcy, thank you. . . that means a lot. . . Denise, thank you!!! LW, one for each of my regular Fourms. . . and not busy. . . INSPIRED!!! Marina, thank you. . . guess I'm just stuck in a time warp!! ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Sven; Gentle maiden surely blessed, to have a knight and poet divine, to love her so! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh goodness, I found a treasure.... |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
got to say it again this is beauiful Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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