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Darkened Treasures Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 18nj |
Tumultuous waves crash over the side My thoughts deluged with anxiety and peril. Slowly I feel the slip from my grasp Of all that I have attained to be. Dreams of enchanment begin to fade away Like a tendril of ashes dissapating in the sky. The sweet smell of fresh blossoms linger farther than I have expected. In the hope of building a solid foundation Did I take too long to reach for the sky? In the plans I drew to be a die-hard romantic Did I forget to express my deepest desires? Sometimes thoughts expected to be shared Are, but need more than just that Sometimes those thoughts need to be expressed And, no better way than the written word "What" you ask, "do I want from you" Why nothing more simple then just this To be enshrined in... ...Everlasting love and eternal bliss Who would have thought a good little girl like you could destroy my beautiful wickedness. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, this is sooooo beautiful! Denise |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
The past is like a ghost or so it seems to be, Although my past is haunting; I still need you to see That it is the future... I dream of every night, And you are the one in my sleep who holds me tight Please, my dear, i beg of you do not give up on this... For we hold so much in our hands ...the dream of our first kiss... Beth< !signature--> You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore [This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
A beautiful and romantic poem, so lovely... Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
So very soft and lovely. Juls |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I enjoyed this poem a lot, I really love how you ended it: To be enshrined in... ...Everlasting love and eternal bliss |
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