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To Me...To Him |
MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
To Me...To Him...a friendly Haiku dance I Slept Past Rising The moon flew all night, I spent dark watching, While dreams of dance kept playing, Sphere of pale shimmering light Till smiles greet daylight. I slept past rising. I waited in dark As clouds phased in, covering Your touches, your mark Then danced in my deep 'Til the movements exhausted And eased me to sleep. M..the tinman and I *2k |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Nice, I like this one. A true dance. Alicia |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice! Denise |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Alicia Denise thank you both for your kind responses ... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Ah so tender, so warm. Made me smile to read it. Juls |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This was great, thank you so much for sharing it with us |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Juls Lakewalker... thankyou both for taking the time to read and respond ~~soft hugs Maureen * I know I am behind responding to others now ...I am just trying to catch up on mine first then will read others..please be patient with me |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
wow.. beaUtiful, MMoonchild.. love this.. -Love, Lynne |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Lynne happy you enjoyed.. ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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