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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Light or No < !signature-->There are those who peer into the supernatural and they see darkly. The things of the future or distant past, refraction there is no Light in them. There are those who see the supernatural dimly a glimpse is enough. Things that inhabit dimly seen as underwater there is no Light in them. There are those who share a duality of supernatural both appearing black and white. The things seen not explained glimpsed with misunderstanding there is no Light in them. Very, rare others see the darkling clearly choose the bright and pure. Supernatural is reality time in flesh is the dark there is much Light in them. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" [This message has been edited by bleeding (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent writing containing insight and truth! Very good, Daniel! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ WOW ! 'Very, rare others see the darkling clearly choose the bright and pure. Supernatural is reality time in flesh is the dark there is much Light in them.' Just WOW ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Amen, Dan! What a privilege to fellowship with you, then read your poetic beauty. Marcy |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
What an intriguing piece of writing, Daniel  enjoyable indeed.. Love, -Lynne |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Thank you ladies for your imput and comments! And Marge, dear...try and come out of your shell and express yourself, ok? roflol love ya! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I loved the flow of this and it's very deep. At least the way I read it Very well done! |
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