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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470
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He is expressive in his poems, < !signature-->*…romantic to no end…* Is he trying to tell me something? or just being a nice friend? He is sweet and he’s funny he’s a very handsome guy, He is charming and attentive; I just can’t figure out why…. I always seem to fall for the ones who never care, I seem to be attracted; to the ones who are never there He is completely different! maybe I will see this is what I really want... But what does he want from me? You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore [This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 08-18-2000).] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Oh hon, this is so lovely! It flows~~and I think you did a marvelous job. Marcy |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Ah, you've written this so well, it's wonderful. I enjoyed having the chance to read it  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Apsolutely beautiful, Beth. Let's see what the answers will be! Love, Mom Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Simply lovely Beth, guess we'll all have to patiently wait to hear the answers huh? Bonnie |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Beth..really liked this one..still..beware of greeks bearing gifts.. Is ellie really your mom? |
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Darkened Treasures Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 18nj |
Ahh, to be immortalized in print, wow! what a feeling! I must say I never thought such a beautiful woman would write such things for me. And like the poster before, yes there are answers to come, but should they be here in a response...I think not. Rather they are to be found in between the thoughts of rhyme. The only question left is will our neighbors tire of the flirts we bat back and forth, our enjoy the banter while living vicaiously through my courtship of the lovely Beth???? Who would have thought a good little girl like you could destroy my beautiful wickedness. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Beth, this is so tender. Such a joy to read. Juls |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I don't normally post a response to my own poems..but i wanted to thank all of you for your replys. Yes, Pegasus, ellie is my mom! And I hope everyone isn't annoyed with a little poetic flirting I am doing with an old (friend?) and fellow pubber. DT-your turn. You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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