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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida ![]() |
a smile for today forgotten sorrows in time shrug tickles giggle -dgvarner "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DgV, This is delightful medicine for those pains that linger! Very good! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...and dont we know i have pains that linger!!! LOL trying to take my own medicine! thanks for reading dennis ![]() dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooh Happy thoughts for the moment,...let's run. Very cool one. Can I ask you a question that I should probably know the answer to,....what is a senyru? A haiku? (exactly)...I have just followed the 5-7-5 of all the other haikus,...but is there something I should know? *I'm a little out there these days,...in left field* Thank you. *Peace. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great poem, I really made me think (I need to do that sometimes) ![]() SpitFire: As far as I understand, haiku deals with a nature subject and senryu doesn't, but both have the 5-7-5 pattern. |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
This gave me a deep within chuckle - I can use all of those I can get...! Delightful... allan ![]() |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
spitfire..i'm sorry! for some reason i thought to send you an explanation to your icq on haiku,senyru, and tanka..i didnt even answer your question here...oops! forgive me..(lakewalker answered you correctly ![]() ![]() lakewalker..we all need to think sometimes..it made me think too! heehee thanks for answering spitfire while i sat in a daze!! haha allan..chuckles are good--glad i could help with that ![]() dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I love the happy feeling I got while reading this. Thanks for that! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
dvg, This is so delightful....and informative too! LOL! "Shrug tickles giggle"...now think about that! I love it. ![]() (i'm speaking to me here, thinking about it) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
eL: i hoped it would do that--it was meant to create a smile...cause i needed one myself! ![]() alle'cram: so glad you found this one delightful! i was on my way out of the "slumps"! (thats where it came from!) dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
And may you find an extra big smile for all the faces you've made happy with your delightful words here. David |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
dg - Add one more happy face, this is great gave me a little tee hee. Bonnie |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
david: thanks for the extra big smile wish ![]() bonnie: always glad to help with a "teehee"! ![]() glad you guys liked my little ditty ![]() dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
It's a mile of smile. I love this, can't do them but I love it! Another bouquet, you'll be able to stock a florist at this rate! ![]() |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
add another satisfied reader to the list, dg....very nice advice for us all ![]() ![]() |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks marsha and kaile..glad to lend a smile ![]() marsha: you can do this! i promise..(and i dont make promises...!) dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Do I detect a playful heart? I hope you NEVER loose it! INclan |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
inclan: playful...hmm..could be... ![]() ![]() thanks for reading! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
dg, this made me smile too. Very lovely and fresh feeling. Juls |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- what's this...18 responses and not one from me yet. how did that happen?! LOL 'shrug tickles giggle'...gotta luv that. ![]() thanks for the smile. ![]() love ya, -tricks |
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