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Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

0 posted 2000-08-19 04:17 PM

Summer lakeshore breeze
so crisp, cool and refreshing
you flow with such ease

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

1 posted 2000-08-19 06:06 PM

Lakewalker,

A Beautiful stroll,
Lakeshore breeze wisk past our smiles
Refreshing zephyr

I like this a lot!
Dennis :^)< !signature-->

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 08-19-2000).]

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2000-08-19 07:11 PM

yup, the rush of cool air through your body as you run....beautiful....

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

3 posted 2000-08-19 09:41 PM

~lovely, I felt the breeze~~

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2000-08-19 10:51 PM

i feel like i'm eating a york peppermint patty...the cool wind rushing through my hair...

very nice

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-08-19 10:54 PM

Lakewalker, so lovely. And the breeze feels wonderful.
Juls

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-08-19 11:41 PM

Refreshing!

Denise

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

7 posted 2000-08-20 02:29 AM

A beautiful and well written haiku. ellie

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2000-08-20 02:49 AM

This is really nice. Love it.

-vicky

"...until you have read the verse
on his heart, you have not truely
met the poet. -vlraynes

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

9 posted 2000-08-20 07:23 AM

Ahhhhhhhhh, well done, Lakewalker. Been there...done that. We just returned from vacation....at the lake.

INclan

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

10 posted 2000-08-21 09:45 AM

Thanks you everyone for your very kind replies, I appreciate them

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