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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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grey wolf calls fading echos swirling along starlit trail the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
could see every line in my head. Good description of the wilderness! Joy |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Pegasus111, Good wilderness imagery, could almost smell the pines. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Great job, I could hear tha ol wolf a howling at the moon! ellie |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I can just see it all in my head. Very well done, I enjoyed this  |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
oh me, oh my, I saw a canyon and I thought I heard the echo! Great job. Marcy I just love these. |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Magical - took me immediately to a new wonderful place. Wow - that's the the power of Haiku!  |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
thanks guys..my cup runneth over.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ditto the others' comments..this is a sheer beauty |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
lovely Words flow heavily, A carbon copy of my heart, As well as my soul. |
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