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0 posted 2000-09-13 04:11 PM



Frost dusts the pumpkins
as the red and gold leaves fall
Autumn waltzes in

© Copyright 2000 Bonnie Church - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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1 posted 2000-09-13 05:02 PM


I really like the feel of this one..nice image

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2000-09-13 05:42 PM


Beautiful, Bonnie, just beautiful!
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3 posted 2000-09-14 08:44 AM



Perfectly said and I love the last line  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



Dennis L. White
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4 posted 2000-09-14 11:40 AM


Bonnie,
  Wonderful Autumn Haiku! WAY TO GO!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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5 posted 2000-09-14 11:46 AM


and such a lovely tune autumn dances to
Moon Dust
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6 posted 2000-09-14 01:29 PM


ah a beauiful sight

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

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