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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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My Bestest Friend Body beaten, dragging pain in every joint weak week finally over. Barely making it home work weighing heavy and then...she smiles. The cares and trials of the cold, harsh world drop away, forgotten. All the problems all the troubles seem silly...she kisses. Driven to excel chasing unholy dollar every, every, every. Claw, bite, scratch rung by painful rung blessed anew...she hugs. Garbage falls away layer by layer by layer the focus narrows. Shack, sweet shack my bestest friend home again...she smiles. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Great poem, all the things a great friend encompasses. Everything else is trivial. Thanks! |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
And is there anything better!!!!! This is great, "blessed anew...she hugs" what a perfect "bestest friend!" Bonnie |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
a great read..thanks for sharing. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very enjoyable, I liked it  |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi Dan, You keep amazing me with what you come up with. This is terrific and I loved the title. Marcy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhh...this is so sweet, Daniel! I love it! Denise |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Thank y'all for the input and comments. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ So glad your 'bestest friend' is home. Enjoyed your thoughts and could feel your smile. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
aw, so sweet.. ^^ Love, Lynne |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Thank you Marge and Lynne! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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