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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Shoe on Other Foot? ‘Gators lurking on the shore chomp...a child has died. Take the body back to den make things from the hide. Lil’ children lampshades human leather suitcases. Masked traveling alligators wearing children skin faces. Big teeth marks; chomp, chomp never need no leather punch. “Save the skin, now dearies we’ll have the rest for lunch”. Disgusting thoughts, indeed slaps one right in the face. Friend, better think about it when next about the marketplace. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
from the way back machine... written around 1988 or early 1989. Part of my first manuscript: "There's a Poet in my Soup" perhaps indicative of why the manuscript didn't do well, eh? Slightly re-written and presented for historical value... in the near future I shall be posting a few from the back manuscripts to garner comments and critiques...ok?< !signature--> bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" [This message has been edited by bleeding (edited 09-02-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ Whew ! Stark realism ... I do recall the era of the craze of alligator purses, shoes and everything else they could garner for profit from the slaughter of these creatures of the swamps. I could never believe that people would buy those things ... much less show them off as they did ! Your render slaps the reader right on the environmental two-faced hypocrisy that prevails. Good show ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thanks Marge lol although I feel compelled from time to time to express righteous outrage at the duplicity of our society...seems the pieces are never very popular....go figger. I guess folks want to be entertained, not brought to task, and reminded how we have an opportunity to do better. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Fantastic - Loved this... Couldn't help chuckling - a masterpiece... Nice to see you here in the pub Bleeding...  |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Hey Bro...interesting and rather chilling read. Never looked at it from that particular POV. "Food" for thought eh? Love ya...Sis Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thanks Marge-i kinda like turning things around...must be my contrary nature? thanks Allan-masterpeice? appreciate the comment, and i thought it just for fun!lol Sister dear! good to see you back in circulation "shy" pawshaw! One word i would never associate with the "Wild Child"! roflol bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Very good writing, but I'm not giving back my purse!  Enjoyed. marcy |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
yeah, ironic, isn't it!! Never see a gator complain.. and if u do, wham.. he's not gonna complain again! ^_^ Well, ppl can be pretty heartles sometimes.. A turn-around-account of such murders.. ^^ and YES!! It's MORE than ok for u to post past poetry, hehe, always looking forward to reading more! -Lynne PS.. sorry, haven't been keeping up with your posts lately, I haven't visited here very often, recently.. I'm still reading u tho!!  |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
hey Marcy! not giving up the purse huh? watch out! hey Lynne, naughty, naughty!not keeping up! lol yes people seem to think they own the world for some reason... thanks for the chuckles! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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