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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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The Heart Of You Sending whispers on the winds To blanket you in "kind" Wiping tear stains from your face While giving warmth to mind Feel the laughter in the night Let in the winds of "old" Bring to you the memories of Your treasured thoughts to hold. Breathe with me my thoughts of you Calming fears of dark Tender words, will touch you with To light for you a spark Hold you with my arms, around And share my loving true Sending whispers on the winds To touch the heart of you.... M *2k |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Maureen ~ I truly love this one...it speaks such emotion...  Steve B |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is beautiful Maureen...i already have such an affinity for the wind (which is part of the reason i like this poem so much)...keep whispering on the wind...maybe your messages of love will reach not only the subject of this poem, but everyone! ~Dawn< !signature--> "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
 Very warm and sweet...I too like the references to the wind...With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you for reading Steve...your responses are always welcome and appreciated ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear Moonchild, This heart you touched with your lovely poem. Such calming words, great flow. marcy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ Nicely stated. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
~Dawn..you always have such sweet responses..thank you ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
"Hold you with my arms, around And share my loving true Sending whispers on the winds To touch the heart of you...." Maureen, beautifully written poem, loved this one. Sit down and bargain "Until your tongues are dry If the havoc and the shame continue We'll drown you in our putrefaction" Primo Levi |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This is warm and gentle...and nice. Jon |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
So beautiful... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Angel...whispers onthe winds..are calming and always warmly felt  Marcy...yes I love the winds ..even the sounds when loud can stir my mind and I feel it's energy Marge...thank you Marge, sometimes I do write simply jon ...I am glad you could enjoy my words Brian...as always, thank you for stopping to read a special poem I wrote..and taking notice of it {{hugs}} Allan...always a kind word from you to all of you thank you for reading and responding to my heartfelt words ~~soft hugs and smiles always Maureen |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is a wonderful poem..so touching. .....beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you beth...your kindness is appreciated ~~softsmiles Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-04-2000).] |
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