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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
My mind id a blur Everything is spinning Am I going insane Or is this the beginning Of a new life A new time and place My life is torn My head is in space How can I face Another day like this Agony and fear Crossed with smiles and bliss Love and hate A scary thought Of life's end Or have I bought Into a world I can trust Not to fade And never to rust Eventually, all dreams come tru. If you wait long enough! Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow!! Great job, Alicia!  I've always known I was crazy and confused, but you've put it into words so well...all the feelings in the right proportions, I couldn't have done a better job myself.  Incredible poem, and hope to see lots more! Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Alicia, This is an enjoyable piece to read. You summed up changes in life so nicely.  Great Job !! < !signature--> Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." [This message has been edited by kelieth (edited 09-02-2000).] |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
Alicia, Well done! I know this feeling very well. Helen |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This is a real whirlwind.....you've captured the feeling well .......hold on tight! Jon |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Alicia, i can certainly identify with this cos i am an introvert who much prefer permanence this was accurately written which tugged at my heartstrings |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Okay so now there are tears in my eyes...Alicia, I can personally relate to this one...I am in battle with myself with a lot of things right now and your poem has taken the words right out of my mouth. Thank You.......beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I am soo glad everyone liked this! Finally, I've posted something from a long time ago, and it isn't repetitive! I was just looking for something to post, seeing as how I've completely run out of new poems. Time to get a pen!!! To all of you who suffer from the same problems, I hope that you are able to find yourself somewhere in between here and there! Love always, Alicia A. Renzelman  |
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