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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA ![]() |
She sprinkles her dust and she waves her magic wand her song like a bell |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
The land that never can now proudly say it has Haikued properly Ilove it ellie I am a haiku junkie and love pretty fairies and their dusty tales Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Nice haiku, I am a haiku novice, but I do like this one. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
im also a haiku novice....but who could resist never neverland! tinkerbell is going to love this! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, It's so nice to see you Tinkering in haikus! Fairie Nice! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think it's wonderful ![]() |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i see sparkles and fairy dust..... ![]() very nice little ditty eL ![]() dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Well Ellie, I am just lovin' this....I should have read more of these before, so few words that create such wonderful images. Keep writing these little gems, I'll eventually get it.... Bonnie |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and the dust sprinkles, bringing a soft smile to this reader's face ![]() |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Thing here are dusty A dust filled environment Don't call E.P.A! Your haikus are enchanting as ever, dear friend! David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ ![]() Casting magic spell Tiny little Tinkerbell I can fly again ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Ellie, amazing images again.. ![]() the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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