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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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His mind wanders through a sterile vaccume of timeless regret a prisoner to the random impulses irregular spasmotic in a dying network of broken promises defeated dreams unfulfilled need atrophy is slow insidious darkly efficient progressing with relentless resolve driving the victim into the black hole of oblivion mercy is a word from another world another time another place compassion exists only in a dream redemption is a fantasy for fools the light dims sputters in the cold reality of truth the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Brrr...this reminds me of the time in 2nd grade when I was nearly paralyzed, left alone...yowch...sad and dark poem, but still an incredible work! Great job, pegasus.  Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Spine chilling coldness of the dark, As we weep from our hearts. Great writing. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
I can relate so closely to your words that I'm indeed shattered! Good writing!! |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Little_Spyro, Kevin, Honey Bunch..thank you for your kind comments  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Pegasus; Dark and haunting...but i've been in this place (there is redemption, i'm living proof) you have turned these deep feelings of sadness into a poetic masterpiece. ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Elli....sister of the dark place..I senced your lingering presence. I am glad that you are safely away, gentle one.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the dark can be a lonely place. . . some would take comfort there. . . but in that comfort, lies madness. . . dark, and haunting. . . well done my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Sven..I am honored that you would take the time to read this piece..thank you. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
...the Lady weeps at such darkness for she has been there herself... |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ahh, my heart...your presence here is a beacon that guides me from purgatory. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Know this my love, I was watching you from a distance all this time...reaching out to touch you when I couldn't. |
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