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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road ![]() |
bump of green below the sky beloved by me tiny track a friend meanders to the top traced with my fingers dwells in my heart taken for a friend when there are none only footsteps away will always be there when I'm long gone [This message has been edited by allan (edited 09-02-2000).] |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow!! Cool! I'd like a hill like that...and yeah, the earth will still be around when we aren't...great job witu your poem allan! ![]() Hmm...I wonder...how many hills have I singed and never noticed those tracks? Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thought provoking........nice. Jon |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Little hills can be so comforting. I'd like this hill for sure. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
Sometimes the hill I see from my house...speaks to me - trouble is, I don't listen half the time! Good piece! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written... enjoyed. |
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