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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2000-08-01 02:13 AM



memories...
faded pictures
  in my mind
things change
  yet remain the same
a blanket
  a spring picnic
a boy
  a girl
young love...
memories
  as if it were
        yesterday

     -vlraynes

"...until you have read
the verse on his heart,
you have not truely
met the poet.
     -vlraynes
  

© Copyright 2000 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
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1 posted 2000-08-01 02:32 AM


Loved it!! ^_^ Well done.. what a beautiful picture.. hehe.. and written so well, in short number of words..

Luv,

Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu

(Please e-mail me at yu_lan_wen_@hotmail.com instead of the e-

vlraynes
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2 posted 2000-08-01 03:02 AM



Lynne-
  Thanks for all the kind words.  You
  just made my day.     Glad you
  liked this one.

  -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on
his heart, you have not truely met
the poet.     -vlraynes

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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3 posted 2000-08-01 03:58 AM


if oni mi first love wuz so sweet.....thanks for sharin this vicky, i really enjoyed it! *S*

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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4 posted 2000-08-01 04:05 AM


Vicky~
My friend ...
I just love memories !
They cascade and set my heart aglow !

Wonderful thoughts, my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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5 posted 2000-08-01 10:34 PM



Michelle-
   That's ok, my first love wasn't
   nearly so sweet as this either.
   Few are, I suppose.    
   Glad you liked it though.  
   Your responses are always
   appreciated.    

Marge-
   Thank you so much.    
   I always look forward to your input.
   Your responses are poetry themselves.

   "They cascade and set my heart aglow!"

       I LOVE THIS...MY TALENTED FRIEND!!  
  
    Love ya both,
          vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
            -vlraynes
  


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-01-2000).]

Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
6 posted 2000-08-02 09:38 AM


Wow!!!
Beautiful poem, Vicky!   Reminds me of the stuff I liked to do...uh...two years ago...

Great job, and hope to read more!!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon

vlraynes
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7 posted 2000-08-02 11:11 PM



Little Spyro-
   Thanks for your kind words.
   Glad this was able to transport you
   so far back in time.  heehee  
  
   -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on
his heart, you have not truely met
the poet.  
             -vlraynes

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-12-25 11:43 AM


*sigh*
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