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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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a deadly silence pierces the atmosphere as a jagged sword cutting mercilessly at my heart my aching soul cries out as my heart is ripped away leaving only a vacant space a flood rushes in to fill the void the waters rise and soon will erupt in a volcano of hot lava tears when the smoke clears I will be left- a shattered soul weeping among the cinders -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
vicky, u paint the picture of heartache here exquisitely...definitely heart-wrenching dear! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Michelle- Thanks so much. I always appreciate your comments.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Your words ring very sharp and true, I could feel each,as I relive my own shattered moments through your words. Lady Nogs |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You describe it well. Excellent writing! Denise |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady Nogs- Thanks for your response. I have definitely had my share of 'shattered moments'. Glad you liked this. -vicky "...until you have read the words on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Denise- Thank you so much for the compliment.  Really glad you enjoyed this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I liked it too, Vicky! Denise |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
yes..i remember these moments of impending "hot lava tears..." yours, mine..ours, theirs.. well written tricks! "a shattered soul weeping among the cinders"  lv,dg... "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Denise- Thanks again! Really glad you enjoyed this. -vicky dg- Oh yes, far too many 'hot lava tears' have been shed. Fortunately, there have also been good friends to share them with. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Thanks for, "well written, tricks". Your compliments mean a lot. -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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