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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
vivid colors fragments of life falling dying piece by piece death to old self rebirth to the new an end a new beginning -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is a great one tricks..love it! would like to "rebirth" myself most days..how does one begin such a process...hmmm.. dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- don't quite have it figured out yet - much easier written than done. glad you like it though. luv ya, tricks -vlraynes |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
vlraynes, Wow, I like this, the form and the message are excellent together. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VLRaynes ~ This is a really neat piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lost Dreamer & Marge- Thank you both so much for your input. Your kind words warm my heart. -vlraynes (vicky) "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Simple and meaningful. Very nice, vicky! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Michelle- Thanks. Glad you liked it. I love all your responses. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Best of luck with your new begining it is enjoyable to read. Look forward to reading more of what you have in store. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kevin- Thanks for reading and responding. Your kind words are truely appreciated. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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