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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... ![]() |
vivid colors fragments of life falling dying piece by piece death to old self rebirth to the new an end a new beginning -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is a great one tricks..love it! would like to "rebirth" myself most days..how does one begin such a process...hmmm.. ![]() dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- don't quite have it figured out yet - much easier written than done. ![]() glad you like it though. ![]() luv ya, tricks -vlraynes |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
vlraynes, Wow, I like this, the form and the message are excellent together. ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VLRaynes ~ This is a really neat piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lost Dreamer & Marge- Thank you both so much for your input. Your kind words warm my heart. ![]() -vlraynes (vicky) "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Simple and meaningful. Very nice, vicky! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Michelle- Thanks. Glad you liked it. I love all your responses. ![]() -vicky ![]() "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Best of luck with your new begining it is enjoyable to read. ![]() ![]() Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kevin- Thanks for reading and responding. Your kind words are truely appreciated. ![]() -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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