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vlraynes
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0 posted 2000-07-29 01:24 AM



vivid colors
   fragments
        of life
falling
    dying
piece
    by
       piece
death
    to old self
rebirth
    to the new
an end
    a new
        beginning


          -vlraynes


"...until you have read the verse
on his heart, you have not truely
met the poet."   -vlraynes

© Copyright 2000 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
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1 posted 2000-07-29 01:26 AM


this is a great one tricks..love it!

would like to "rebirth" myself most days..how does one begin such a process...hmmm..



dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran

vlraynes
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2 posted 2000-07-29 01:34 AM



   dg-
     don't quite have it
     figured out yet - much
     easier written than done.  
     glad you like it though.  

              luv ya,
                   tricks

   -vlraynes
  

Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 2000-07-29 10:10 AM


vlraynes, Wow, I like this, the form and the message are excellent together.  
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-07-29 11:40 AM


VLRaynes ~
This is a really neat piece.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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5 posted 2000-07-30 12:04 PM



Lost Dreamer & Marge-
Thank you both so much for your
input.  Your kind words warm my heart.  

-vlraynes (vicky)


"...until you have read the
verse on his heart, you have
not truely met the poet.
              -vlraynes

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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6 posted 2000-07-30 11:43 PM


Simple and meaningful. Very nice, vicky! *S*

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

vlraynes
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7 posted 2000-07-30 11:47 PM



Michelle-
  Thanks.  Glad you liked it.
  I love all your responses.  

  -vicky  

"...until you have read the verse
on his heart, you have not truely
met the poet.  
  -vlraynes

kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
8 posted 2000-08-01 10:54 AM


Best of luck with your new begining it is enjoyable to read.   Look forward to reading more of what you have in store.  

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

vlraynes
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9 posted 2000-08-02 11:54 PM



Kevin-
  Thanks for reading and responding.
  Your kind words are truely appreciated.  

  -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
  -vlraynes

passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-12-25 11:42 AM


nice
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