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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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pieces of broken glass falling falling into a broken glass of water... i read the script, though i've read it many times-- only to understand, to know, to grasp. perhaps, to possess. for a minute-- or a minute second i wondered if the water was a liquid or a solid. as i listened i heard it crash... i was mourning the death of the stars as the world began to blind my eyes; the morning. pieces breaking into pieces shattering the silence pieces pieces... -dgvarner< !signature--> "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
dgvarner, a very haunting piece. wonderful images. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I'm so glad you posted this one. You know it's always been one of my favorites. luv you much -vlr  |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Great post. Chilling. Wonderful job. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, this poem speaks volumes. great job writing this. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i was about to use the word "haunting" but it seems like Brian has already beaten me to it ...but its still the best word i can think off-hand of this poem  |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Mysterious and melancholic, dgvarner... What an awesome piece! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey guys..thanks so much for responding..this is one of my favorite odd ones! in college i used to pull these weirdos out of my .... uh, mind (!) like they were nothin'!! to be quite honest with you, it has many meanings, depending on where you are in the poem..but to explain it would be very difficult..!! anyway, i DO enjoy the responses!! thanks again dg"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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