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zarre New Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 5Hull Uni / Tring, England |
Colours ripple and merge into a blur Images vanish in the forming light And, awakening, I lose sight of her A lady fading with the end of night. Fragments reflect our dance and embrace Shaped by emotions amazingly strong. I try in vain to recall her face Sure only that her hair was flowing long. Her sorrow salved with warmth in love-linked hearts We stood together alone, music played... I rise now, and the falling dream departs Though, unnoticed, some memories have stayed. One day, those distant echoes may be why I turn, to take the road less travelled by. Hi all! Just thought I'd dip my foot in for the first time with this sonnet... |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
What a wonderful poem...your dream is breath taking and beautiful..I thnk you should dip your feet more often!! You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This is absolutely lovely! I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email!  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Wonderful first post. I enjoyed it much ! Welcome to Passions  |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
A very lovely first poem. Its elegance lingers in the mind. I liked this very much. |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Great first post Memories help us live great job. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I like this. Welcome to Passions! Dip those poetic feet in anytime. vlraynes |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wonderful poem, I enjoyed, welcome to Passions, hope you stay here is enjoyable. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome to passions...i enjoyed this muchly...dig those rhymes and may you feel free to plant your foot for long here |
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zarre New Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 5Hull Uni / Tring, England |
Wow! Thanks for all those kind comments. I certainly look forward to spending more time here (in between writing a 20000 word thesis this summer). This certainly seems like a friendly place to be |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Zarre! I enjoyed this! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zarre~ A most enjoyable read. Welcome to the family of Passionate Poets. The BEST gosh-darned poetry site on the web. You will enjoy your stay. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Welcome, zarre!!! This is soooooo melodious!!! i love it !! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent  |
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