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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Luring me with a promise of salvation The night beckons me into it's embrace I walk away from my sanctuary into the darkness, leaving no trace Never looking back over my shoulder Disappearing, like I’d never been tears dried on my swollen cheeks looking forward to my life of sin I know just where this path will lead and I have no fear as I walk that way It pains me not to make this decision and I will never rue this day I’ve taken my life into my own hands no one else will decide my fate walking away from the pain of you I pray that it’s not too late As dawn slowly lifts her morning veil to reveal the light of a brand new day I hide my smile of pleasure at having found the courage to run away |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Great poem, as always Poet deVine. Such strong feelings you have portrayed in leaving someone, sends a chill up my spine  I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Poet D, this poem is EXCELLENT! it is SO well expressed. "walking away from the pain of you"... I love that line. A difficult time-beautifully expressed. take care, janet marie ...found your heart-then lost your lover...licked your wounds then run for cover... take your time...there will be another... and dont make the same mistake twice... unless you can pay the price... Dan Fogelberg |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Moving on... a difficult venture, indeed - and you do it well...  |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Poet, This is a wonderful poem about courage to move on. In my business, I often tell my people just before going into an important meeting, "You have to be willing to walk away from the table." As long as you have an attitude like that, you're in the driver's seat. Our daily life is no different. You can't advance unless you move forward. You have to take that risk. ~Gene |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Where do you get all this talent?! lol Beautiful poem! I'm just glad I don't have to do it yet...actually, I'm just starting to go out on dates... Beautiful as usual, In every way, that's what I say!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sharon- This is a vision of strength in the making. It's never too late. Smile broadly ... you've earned that right. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I find this an extremely good poem, speaking of pain and the courage to walk out of it. I only hope this is not a "true" poem, for if so....hugs girl and lots of strenght ! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful expression of strength and courage, Sharon! Denise |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I am going to give you a "Gold Star" for this poem PDV. I loved this, I have been there and understand completely. *hugs* ~X~ Vivian Greene ~It is not our circumstances that create our discontent or contentment. It is us.~ |
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Beverly Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123New Mexico |
"as dawn slowly lifts her morning veil"... Oh what power in these words. I always enjoy reading your work. I look forward to more! Thank you! |
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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
Like everyone else I am amazed at you expressed such a difficult situation so beautifully. I love the personification of the night and the dawn. "The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it." -Dylan Thomas |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for this...glad i went back in here today |
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