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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Harmonic Balance (Brian's Challenge) I search the heavens for harmonic balance while the reigning nightmares perpetrate their cruel and devious missions within me. I spy the wondrous sparkles of illumination dancing before my tired focus seeking eyes, yet then I have the quiet solemn revelation "Stars have their moment and then they die" The beauty goes from my vision knowing this and knowing that tomorrow I will still seek more. What I seek may not balance with harmony I've entered a complexity of significant results, needing to reach levels beyond my own knowledge. Where it leads me to in momentary reasoning I couldn't begin to explain in simple terminology, only thought patterns have eclipsed and demand that I take notice of their forging presence in my mind. For now I ride the tide that crests and journeys me beyond my harmonious desires to somewhere. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Gloria, this is great! Seems like you met that challenge!  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Ria, A stunning poem, wow. Amazing images. Challenge brief completed and exceeded "Out of sorrow entire worlds have been built Out of longing great wonders have been willed They're only little tears, darling, let them spill" Nick |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
this is jam packed full of VERY deep thoughts ... had to read it several times to absorb all the relationships ... wonderful work here dreamer ... i love to think and this one did it to me ... fav lines ... ... reigning nightmares perpetrate their cruel and devious missions within me. I spy the wondrous sparkles of illumination ... and ...For now I ride the tide that crests and journeys me beyond my harmonious desires to somewhere. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Challenge well met, Gloria! Fantastic writing!  Denise |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
very nicely done... great emotion and feeling captured ... I love it ...and the challenge filling my library with stars |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
This is beautiful, LD! Very, very inspiring! *S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Yes...inspirational...loved it!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lost Dreamer, You dunnit!!!! and very well indeed.... truly enjoyed reading this one... regards, sudhir |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank you all very much for your wonderful compliments, I appreciate immensely. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Gloria, i enjoyed this one immensely...this reads as a speaker who is at ease with himself searching elusively for "harmonic balance"...love the theme here, for arent all of us like that in one way or another?  |
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