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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Emptiness the emptiness is the worse walking about our empty home dark feelings, she isn’t here. She’s laying in a hospital bed tubes and monitors everywhere... her pampered cat questioning me. Our dog runs out excited, yipping dances expectantly around her mini-van only to come back sad, disappointed. “Mama just isn’t here, boy” his eyes accuse, question me we whimper together, unconsoled. Making coffee early this morn I cried holding her unused cup no sleep for me in cold, empty bed. Been a week now, of absolute hell since she has been gone away the emptiness is taking it’s toll. She called me this afternoon weakness, almost despair in her voice “dreaming of coming home,” whispered. Walking about our empty home dawn breaks, so utterly alone... she’s laying in a hospital bed. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
This is unequivocably sad. My heart goes out to you big brother. I miss you guys and will keep praying for her healthy return. I know that you've tried all you could so give it up to DAD. He knows what to do and how to do it. Hug Fluff and Elvis for us. We miss them too. (((((HUGS)))) and lots 'o' love. Sis Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Saddness fills me as I read. This hit home for me and, man can I understand the helplessness felt in a situation like this. My prayers are with you and yours. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Such sad feelings of the emptiness you feel. Prayers are sent lifting you both. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i dont know what to say, bleeding, only that i hope by the time you read this, your loved one is getting better, being on the road to recovery and will soon be able to reunite with you all  God bless and all the best  |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
seems i'm getting sad pretty well down... powerfull stuff to carve a poem out of. think i'm going to make a conscious shift to more positive things...lol despite the name- bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
“dreaming of coming home,” whispered. this is tragic, bleeding! GOD BLESS!!! the way ya feelin yeah ya got mi feelin really bad.....sigh love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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