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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Union of Souls A gifted painter, an inspired poet-Destiny did Entwine, Two lives enhanced, then balanced by this rare moment in time. Dedication discovered, built on the secret truths of the past, This union is eternal-fates enduring gift to last. Reflections of each other-understanding the need to unite, Recognizing the shadows cast by the dark and the light. This union of souls cannot be broken, never compromised, Completed by one another's presence, their paths finally realized. Solitude exchanged for protection-enforcing this brotherly bond, Acceptance, and faith-assure their Journey's goal and beyond. Janet Marie ** written for 2 friends of mine who had an extraordinary friendship...they were a lesson in respect, commitment, and trust. ...baby, dont you work so hard for this prize you found... it will all be gone when you turn around... cause ... nothin' lasts forever anyway... Rick Roberts-Windmills |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Love comes in many forms...love of a friend is one. At times, I think perhaps it is one of the strongest! Question: Is there a particular reason - on line one - that you capatilized "Entwine?" |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
I think I'm going to print this out and frame this...but then again I think I'd have to do that with ALL of your poems! This is great! It means a little more to me now that I've got a true girlfriend now...I swear she's like no other (is that an old line?)... Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
This is a wonderful poem, Janet Marie. Your friends should be honored to have a friend like you. ~Gene |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I love this poem Janet Marie. It doesn't only show the beauty of this friendshow, it also shows what a beautiful person you are. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
as always you guys are SO sweet, and way too good to me..(smile)...thanks for the very much appreciated words... 2-Christopher...the captializing of the word was due to me being a "space cadet"..LOL...I was posting that one WAY past my bedtime... so pardon the typo... Spyro,u-gene and munda...you guys are spoiling me  janet marie ...found your heart-then lost your lover...licked your wounds then run for cover... take your time...there will be another... and dont make the same mistake twice... unless you can pay the price... Dan Fogelberg |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Janet Marie! All relationships should be so blessed! Denise |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
This read so nicely, I enjoyed this thoroughly, thanks for posting this one!  ~X~ Vivian Greene ~It is not our circumstances that create our discontent or contentment. It is us.~ |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Just bumping back some of my faves from a while ago!  |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
A gifted painter, an inspired poet-Destiny did Entwine, Two lives enhanced, then balanced by this rare moment in time. Dedication discovered, built on the secret truths of the past, This union is eternal-fates enduring gift to last. Reflections of each other-understanding the need to unite, Recognizing the shadows cast by the dark and the light. This union of souls cannot be broken, never compromised, Completed by one another's presence, their paths finally realized. Solitude exchanged for protection-enforcing this brotherly bond, Acceptance, and faith-assure their Journey's goal and beyond. _____________________________________________ JM, So few people experience friendships as this .. it should be treasured. It is a treasure. So special. This is so beautiful and your talents leave me in awe...leaves me at a loss/words.Marcy |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
What a remarkable poem about a special kind of soulmates! I really enjoyed this. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you for sharing...relationships built on truth is the only way to go ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Relationships come and go but friends stay the same. I like this one Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Jan, How beautiful and joyful a loving friendship. I thank God that he has given me this too, you express it so magnificently. Love, ellie le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of.. |
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