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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
I held you close, in my arm. Thinking why you shielded me from harm. The blood of two, me and you. The parameds swarming, around this sidewalk world. I could feel you, where my heart was. I felt torn like my heart was. The hospital light, seemed so bright. As I laid beside you, I've stuck with you through. The pain, the rain, teardrops from my eyes. As I raise my soul to those ever welcoming skies. You wake up, to find me dead. Even though our passion is still red. I watch you from celestial skies as you asked God all of the whys. "Where did she go?" you ask I look down and smile. --for I had made the ultimate sacrifice. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Passionate and undying love...with a touch of tragedy...*midnightblues sniffles* Lovely poem! I like this *S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I love this poem! Made me think of a very close friend of mine. Keep writing your beautiful poetry. Dawn |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
This exellent piece. Touches the very heart in me. It's sad yet comforting for me to see. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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chibi_dragon Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58 |
Lovely "Romeo and Juliet" style poem. It shows what lovers are willing to do for each other, especially if the other gets hurt...*sniffles*.  --Chibi [This message has been edited by chibi_dragon (edited 07-08-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this reads hauntingly beautiful...the ultimate sacrifice of one's life to ensure her lover will survive...i do hope i will find a soulmate whom i will be willing to give up my life too  |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
The true grief of the heart can be never known even to the closest of friends. The real feelings cannot be known to anyone but ourselves... |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
That really is the true meaning of what it is to love someone, isn't it.. when you can confidently offer that "ultimate sacrifice" in your own mind.. very nice, I liked the feeling in this. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
"what greater love hath man than to give his life for another....." lovely read. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Sometimes for love you have to be able to sacrifice everything, including your life to love and to save the one that you love. When the vow is taken, it lasts beyond the grave sometimes, but not often enough. You have to love someone enough to sacrifice your life for him/her, to donate his/her life to insure the other lives. Sometimes it takes more than one...*sniffle* --Little Girl [This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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