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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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Un-named.. any suggestions? (hopeful smile..  )Listened to me tear myself to shreds, Helped me piece together my soul, afterwards. Held my hand as I wept, Even if it was only figuratively. Smiling beneath rivers and mountains and walls to conquer I know you’ll always be there, Perhaps always discontented. I wish I could stitch your soul too, Make it whole, as mine.. Don’t take this the wrong way but I love you, As a friend. I wrote this a while ago.. I just found it now.. =P Finding a lot of things I forgot I wrote.. -Lynne |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is a true dedication to a friend, sounds like someone who's been there for you when you've needed. My suggestion for a title would be: As A Friend Thanks for sharing it here with us. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
wow..... mi suggestion... hmmmm Love Between Friends sounds barmy.....hehehehe too bad tat's all i can tink of...been crackin mi brain... thanks for contributing, this is lovely...wish i had a fren like urs too love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is lovely writing, but definitely tough to title. Sleeping on it didn't help. Maybe Soul Mender?To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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bb4thunder Junior Member
since 2000-12-17
Posts 12Berkeley, CA, U.S.A |
Nice read.. I liked it, however it is curious that you should use such hard words as figuratively and discontented in a poem about friendship... keep up the good work Thunder |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
a person is lucky to find one true friend in a lifetime..you seem to have found yours. hand on to him/her... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Hey thanx guys! ^_^ Mmm.. yes.. a little unusual to use 'figuratively' and 'discontented' Thunder, lol.. well it was an unusual circumstance.. well, I probably wont show this person.. they can see it if they like, in here.. Hehe, Pegasus I have been so lucky, yes.. I have found several true friends now.. this was written for/of one such friend, who has kinda left, figuratively.. *_^ Thanx all for your comments and suggestions.. I think perhaps, Denise, I will use your suggestion of "As a Friend.." it sounds 'right'.. ^_^ Thanx.. Luv, Lynne |
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