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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I have never seen your face Except in the photos you send And though we speak of fantasy I know this is not pretend Sometimes I wish the Internet Wasn’t the only place we could meet I wish we could sit together Have a drink or something to eat Who’s to say where this will lead Now that we’ve taken this start So many miles separate us Maybe in distance, but never in heart |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh, PDV this is cool!!! Definatley an inspiration!! I knew you wouldn't let me down!! Me LIKES!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Sharon, Very nice I like it also, after I'm done with another project maybe I will attempt this challenge. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Another devine poem from the DeVine one! (I know it's supposed to be spelled "divine" but "devine" would mean anything near that level written by someone called Sharon...) Beautiful job (as usual), and very inspiring! I'm in awe! ...mmmff...rrrggghh...and I'm stuck! HELP!! a struggling Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Sharon~ The first thought in my mind when I finished reading this poem was "leave it to Sharon to perfect a challenge and then add her own unique creativity to it." Excellent poem! Girl, you have more talent in your baby finger than I do in my whole body! As always, you're an inpsiration, my friend Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Sharon! I love it! Denise |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
This is great. I enjoy reading your poetry every time. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Poet deVine love this....so true of today's world as we get increasingly wired by the Internet...and find online friends....this is an realistically accurate that will tug at the heartstrings of many people a poem much enjoyed |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
PDV a wonderful poem. It is hard to believe that you can connect to people from your computer screen until it happens to you. much enjoyed. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Casonova Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 35Mays Landing |
Not much more can be added here.. Casonova.. Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Sharon, this is WOW...you have this knack for perfecting your poetry in an awesome way. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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