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kaile
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0 posted 2000-06-19 08:39 PM


Sad snake hibernates~
Longs for squirrel in gold land~
Amidst warm weather


[This message has been edited by kaile (edited 06-20-2000).]

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allan
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1 posted 2000-06-26 01:23 PM


Kaile, let me see if I've got this right...

hibernates = Autumn
gold = Summer
warm weather = Spring

mmm... Winter?

(Maybe he's sad because he has to go through Winter before he can find a Squirrel??)  

'Very inventive. 'Made me think!  

Mon Cherie
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2 posted 2001-12-04 03:32 PM


Hehe... I have a different interpretation

hibernation = winter
gold = autumn
warm weather = spring/summer

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