seasonal haikus --kailes challenge

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seasonal haikus --kailes challenge

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2000-06-16 04:27 PM

whitest blanket folds
comes the rain and flowers nod
flutter leaves to fly

~*~ ~@~ ~*~

spring forth summer heat
fall into waking winter
and begin again

"A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2000-06-16 04:49 PM

I like both haikus, but, I love the second, very well done! Challenge well met my friend

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

kelieth
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since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

2 posted 2000-06-17 01:16 AM

Well done.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

3 posted 2000-06-17 11:23 AM

DGV,
Way to go!I also liked the second best!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

4 posted 2000-06-17 08:54 PM

hey, awesome! yeah, I reckon the second is rather clever.. hehe.. ok, i must do mine now..

Lynne

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

5 posted 2000-06-17 10:26 PM

Two for the price of one and both very good!
Good show! David

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2000-06-19 06:51 PM

love both ur attempts,dgvarner!

love the line:"whitest blanket folds"....describles snow-capped landscape very well indeed

very clever with the second haiku....will offer this for you

Winter falls~
Buried land revealed~
Summer springs

this is abbreviated version of haiku(3-5-3)...hope u like it...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2000-07-15 02:06 PM

DGVarner~
How perfectly delightful.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-12-25 11:32 AM

nicely done

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