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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Line by Line Word by Word Day by Day This is all This is me See? Heart on sleeve Led by emotion A little naive? Maybe. . . Played a fool? Sometimes. . . Hurt by others? Usually. . . Happy? . . . yes. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
it does take a happy, self-assured man to be able to pen down these delighful,funky poetic gems!!  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is very different kind of writing for you. The ending is happy, but there is something in the middle that is sad. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Sven! I love it! Denise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The style is a little unusual for you, but I like it. Nice form and I think you say a lot in just a few words. Great writing, Sven. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Been hurt b4 but emerged stronger and wiser...I can relate to this...pain and agony and yet no-regrets...*S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you my friends. . . glad that you liked it. . . ------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ You are uniquely YOU ! What a joy for us all. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the format here |
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