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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Pure Delight His kiss like lightening electrocuting my mind, his touch a thunder clap flying me out of control. His desires wind swept as he vowed foreverness, his soft kindness echoing deeply touching my soul. He sleeps during the day waiting patiently for me, his realm felt in my dreams a palace of pure delight |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Lost Dreamer, Your dream lover sounds like a HOTEE! great read! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
If I could dream that good I'd never want to wake. Great poem.  Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Dennis: Thanks for reading and replying, it was an amazing dream to say the least. Kevin: Thank you, glad you enjoyed, I've never dreamed so vividly and at least remembered till this dream. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
LD..i'm jealous..i want to dream as vividly!  sounds like a great time was had while the moon was high...  dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow LD what a great dream.... and a great read... could see the curtains billowing with the breeze. Bonnie |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
"Pure Delight" it is your poetry.  |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Visions of loveliness Float through your brain And in mystic mem'ries Your dream-lover will remain Waiting for that moment At the set of sun, When you two are reunited Oh boy, won't that be fun! Great poem LD, David |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
dgvarner: It was interesting, and shocking too...LOL Bonnie: Yes quite the dream, glad you enjoyed the highlights. Munda: How sweet of you, I thank you most kindly. David: Thank you for your verse, and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice pic, Gloria - Nice poem All in all - simply and purely delightful!!!..  |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
When dreams like that come along you wish they were reality. Joy |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Still at night, i wait~ Fidgeting, excitement felt~ Dream-lover appears! a senyru for you, Lost Dreamer...nice poem, nice images here...Brilliant! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
funny..I took this as a love from another time zone...sleeping while you are awake, yet visiting you in your dreams (and maybe you in his). I guess I am the eternal romantic! Wonderful stuff girlie! ~Heather |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
LD your Palace souds very nice ,romantic warm and sensual. Nice Jon |
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