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4 Season Haiku (Kailes Challenge) |
Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Sleepy plants awake < !signature-->Feverish sun, colors change Get new snow blanket or New Life, Hot Sunshine Colors announce the Harvest Frosty Hiatus .............................. Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 06-16-2000).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow Dennis! Challenge well met! You are the king of haikus! Kaile will love this when she sees your haikus. Both are perfect, I can't decide which I like better. I'll have to try this challenge Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Two frosty and warm beauties. Well, I'm off to work on my own. Joy |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, I'm not the king of haikus, I'm more like the Haiku Clown! LOL Thanks for the kind replies! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
well "haiku clown" you've done it again...!! i enjoy your "clowning" dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Well, Haiku clown and dear brother mine, They are both superb! Love, Sis C):?) Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
haiku clown...always enjoy ur delightful pieces revealing this great sense of humour and this one is no exception well done...like Melissa, i can't decide which one i like more! BTW, to set the record straight, i am a "he" |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, OOPS! Sorry about the wrong gender assumption. It's hard to tell from here, I think it was the name that led me down path there! My faux pas! LOL Dennis :^( |
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