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4 in 1~Kaile's challenge

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-06-16 01:26 PM

Tired tree branches
Awake to sun on green leaves
Snow and rain both born

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2000-06-16 02:16 PM

Excellent Joy! Challenge well met! I loved the last line "snow and rain both born"

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

2 posted 2000-06-16 02:18 PM

Joy,
This is so good, Well Done ! Dennis :^)

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

3 posted 2000-06-16 04:16 PM

great one joy!

dg

"A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2000-06-19 06:35 PM

love the sentiment behind this:Awake to sun on green leaves....such promise of daylight!

thanx for trying this out...i like

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

5 posted 2000-06-19 08:09 PM

You're very welcome Kaile. Thanks everyone for replying!

Joy

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