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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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theres a moment between sleep and dream where my heart aimlessly wanders. theres a fire being snuffed somewhere in a soul with used-up wishes. only sadness remains. laughter heals the wounds but for a moment. love is something far away... theres a second when my heart forgets and boldly believes again-- but seconds fade, and memories linger-- and scars dont wash away... --dgvarner "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
heres a second when my heart forgets and boldly believes again-- but seconds fade, and memories linger-- and scars dont wash away beautifully written but quite sad. I get my blue moments and they are exactly like you described. great poem. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "You do not destroy an idea by killing people; you replace it with a better one". Edward Keating ----- |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This is sad but so beautiful! |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Well written sad poem. The truth is there with in the words. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
love this,dgvarner.short, simple and yet so true  love the lines: laughter heals the wounds but for a moment often feel the same way myself |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This is powerful and sad, I must agree, but it is full of truth... .... although I have showered a thousand times you scent still lingers on my mind. Parker |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
This is a very well writen poem, it sounds as if you could use somebody to share your warmth with. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey parker! so glad you stopped back in to the pub! and especially glad you pulled me up again thanks for the wonderful reply...so, the showers havent worked aye... lol jose..yep..i got plenty of warmth to spare..and could certainly benefit from someone with which to share!! thanks for your reply ..hugs,dg "i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- OUCH...i can hear the pain and feel the hurt in this...can relate all too well. the scars don't wash away, but they do fade over time. consider yourself hugged. love you bunches, -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Hope those scars are fading fast, my friend. Enjoyed this, as I do all of your work. hugs To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
tricks..the scars are many..and i'm only 31!!! but they tend to hurt less with time.. thanks for pulling me back up.. mar..these are 'old' scars now..but they still shine from time to time..thanks for reading mar hugs, dg "i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..." |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
This is so true....although I think those scars, however painful, all make up a part of who we are, so we just hang on and hope it heals quickly this time. Best |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
dg beautiful. i am speechless. Alicia A. Renzelman |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
best..i think youre right--without the pain, that makes the scars, we wouldnt quite appreciate the better things in life.. alicia..thank you for your speechlessness hugs, dg |
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