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kaile
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0 posted 2000-05-30 11:39 AM


Pimples forgotten~
Endearing dimples appear~
Face lights up in joy~
Sweet girl of my dreams walks past~
Dazzling smile that melts me

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Dennis L. White
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1 posted 2000-05-30 01:26 PM


kaile,
  I don't understand the title but I like this! Keep up the good work!  Dennis :^)

  Moonbeams radiate
As the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance!

D.L.White :^)


kaile
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2 posted 2000-05-30 09:16 PM


for isn't it heavenly when the girl of your dreams casts you this bewitching smile?
dgvarner
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3 posted 2000-05-31 12:23 PM


....or the guy of your dreams....  sigh  ...



 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

Yu Lan
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4 posted 2000-06-01 12:59 PM


hehe, yeah well done kaile.. ^_^

Lynne

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5 posted 2001-12-04 03:11 PM


Yes, it's this wonderful when you're treated with such a sight! I can just remember how it felt like so long ago. Now it's just some memory locked up in some dusty chamber of my brain

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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