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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Pimples forgotten~ Endearing dimples appear~ Face lights up in joy~ Sweet girl of my dreams walks past~ Dazzling smile that melts me |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
kaile, I don't understand the title but I like this! Keep up the good work! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate As the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance! D.L.White :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
for isn't it heavenly when the girl of your dreams casts you this bewitching smile? |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
....or the guy of your dreams.... sigh ... "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
hehe, yeah well done kaile.. ^_^ Lynne |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yes, it's this wonderful when you're treated with such a sight! I can just remember how it felt like so long ago. Now it's just some memory locked up in some dusty chamber of my brain _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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