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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
There I sat < !signature-->Alone in my darkness With walls all around my heart Completely closed off to the world I felt your radiance Even before you entered the room I knew my life was about to change And change it did You breached my walls Stormed my defenses You tossed my troubles away And took hold of my heart I still can recall that day In every detail And yet I do not know What has happened to me You invited me over We had dinner by candlelight We cuddled as we watched a movie As I turned to leave you kissed me goodnight On the drive home I wondered, why is this happening Then with tears of joy, I realized She is my valentine This is written with a heavy heart. I have never like Valentine's Day. I have yet to have a good one. The one in this poem, she does exsist. I messed up and it is over. I just wish she knew how I truely feel. Anyways, you guys keep on writing and have a happy Valentine's Day. "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all." [This message has been edited by Scorched Dragon (edited 01-26-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is a beautiful poem, Scorched Dragon. You write well. Have you showed it to her? If you did perhaps that would patch things up. I know I would melt over a poem like this if one had been written for me! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
No she hasn't seen it. No guts on my part. But maybe I should remember the old saying and advice I have given, "No guts, no glory." I have always been scared of lossing her friendship, she is a wonderful friend. But maybe now is the time. I think I will this Valentine's Day. Who knows maybe it will be my first good one. Thanx. "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a beautiful poem, Scorched Dragon! I wish you the best!  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I hope so! Once again, good luck! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A beautiful poem indeed ! I hope this year will be a very good Valentine. |
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dovesongs Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102Michigan |
Oh, please do send this to her. I wish you a happy ending. Don't let fear get in your way, most of the time truly good friends do appreciate honesty. (Just a thought). Anyway, best wishes for your and Happy Valentine's Day. You will be in our prayers. |
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