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kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia

0 posted 2000-01-24 01:27 AM


Like the sun is to the moon
the waters to the desserts
The spring is to the fall
Summer is to winter
We are different but
together we are whole.

Our individual personality
Our likes and dislikes
the heart aches we have encountered
Lives experiences we have had
relationships that have not succeed
has taught us understanding

We are totally opposite
and have our own opinions
But we can agree on one thing
Neither one of us are wrong
Nor or we always right
we can communicate

When we search for a  helping hand
Guidance through a storm
Someone to lean upon
to  give us strength
we can rely on one another
to be our light when needed.

I believe no one is ever alone
There is their other half
Out there amongst the world
I  am one of the fortunate souls
Who has been blessed to find
My other half in you!

                

 You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel. Carol King

© Copyright 2000 Kathy Harmon - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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Posts 1102
Texas
1 posted 2000-01-24 11:03 PM


I like it! Especially the last stanza

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-01-25 12:18 PM


Beautiful! There is a fable that says our souls were born in pairs..and we spend our lives trying to find our 'soulmate'.... Now.. dare you send this to someone?  

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
3 posted 2000-01-25 04:48 AM


Thank-you for your replies. As for the dare-I actually wrote this to the man I have spent the last 6 years of my life with. He enjoyed it to. He is my Valentine

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King



Denise
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4 posted 2000-01-25 11:00 AM


This is beautiful, Kitkat! So fortunate you both are to have found each other!

Denise

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 2000-01-29 05:13 AM


Beautiful poem Kitkat. I enjoyed this a lot.  
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