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Angel
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since 1999-07-02
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0 posted 2000-02-05 11:39 PM


Insperable; minds, bodies and souls as one
With your smile that manages to bring the sun
Incredibly sweet, thoughtful, and kind
Lingering thoughts of you always left behind
Lasting memories of us I know I won't forget
Always dreaming of you; since the day we met
Learning something new with each passing day
Wondering how you know how to make it okay
And knowing that I never want us to part
Young and free with each other at heart
Something so special; and something so right
Listening to you, I could listen all night
Once, not so long ago, I was lost and afraid
Vaguely I remember those mistakes I've made
Ending the day that you entered my life
You were the who ended all of my strife
Only you that can make me feel like this
Undying love; beginning with a simple kiss


 ~Susie~


© Copyright 2000 Susan Acacio - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-06 03:54 PM


Wow! A beautiful acrostic poem of love! Very lovely, Susie!

Denise

Angel
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since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2000-02-08 08:16 PM


Thank you so much  .

 ~Susie~


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-02-09 09:07 AM


Lovely! These are hard to do and you did it beautifully!  
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
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4 posted 2000-02-13 09:54 PM


Wonderful!  I have a rough time with these and yours flows so nicely making it seem so natural and simple.
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