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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas 
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To My Valentine Once upon A time There was Truth to the Myth of what You And I Had found In a blank paged Fairy tale. Snow white Doesn't sleep In a casket made of Glass Slippers will break If you wear them. Walk across this Written word With fingers Gently Seeking Loving You And me No more. He loves Me He loves me! Not… Enough. To: My Valentine Will you Be mine No longer… ~ Angela Erin Burke ~ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
So sad  < !signature-->You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel. Carol King [This message has been edited by kitkat (edited 01-24-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How sad and lovely! Good Job! Now! Dare you send it to someone? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is wonderful, Angela! Sad yet beautiful! Denise |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Thanks everyone. This kind of helped get of of the "poetry slump" I was in, I'm glad you enjoyed it. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
woops! [This message has been edited by Saxoness (edited 01-25-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
That's certainly a twist away from our normal valentine's isn't it? haha....This is sad, but well done. <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
In its sadness, so beautiful.  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Loved, it Angela... especially the glass slippers do break line... very well done. You have inspired me! |
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dovesongs Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102Michigan |
Hope your Valentine's day isn't this sad! @--}--- @--}--- @--}--- @--}--- @--}--- @--}--- @--}--- @--}--- @--}--- @--}--- @--}--- @--}--- Dozen roses for you to get it off to a good start. Happy Valentine' Day Saxoness. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Now this is different...but it's very good... Hope your Valentine's Day is happier than the poem!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I agree with everyone else.. very different take on a valentine.. I enjoyed it..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow very sad here. I liked this one tons though!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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