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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2001-02-07 01:07 PM

My Valentine Poem for You

I feel tender pellets of  falling rain;
I see soft remnants of the setting sun;
I hear your voice in harmonious refrain.

I touch distance within your smile;
I know love through your blue eyes;
I dial your love with beats of my heart.

I run my fingers through your intellect;
I caress moments in anticipation of you;
I give my love so that light can reflect.

I sit thinking, and thinking of only you;
I decorate your being with sweetness;
I follow the scent of patience to you.

I castle our love within my beating heart;
I dance around words that will enlighten;
I speak serenely so never will you depart.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
1 posted 2001-02-07 01:15 PM

Very sweet v-day poem. I really liked the way it was written. Wonderful choice of words.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
2 posted 2001-02-09 01:30 AM

I feel the gentle calm of day;
I see the ocean's majestic sway;
I hear your breathing in rhythmic play.

I touch stars within your eyes;
I know love through your golden heart;
I answer your love from deep inside.
I hold your care free tender mind;
I eagerly rush the minutes to be with you;
I give my love to pace your time.

I sit here thinking of my love, it is you;
I behold the mystical pattern of your heart;
I'm entranced by your every move.

I knock gently on your doors of love;
I embrace the words that bind us;
I honor the gift of you sent from above.


"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
3 posted 2001-02-14 05:16 PM

You make me sit here and sigh you two! Beautiful poems!
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
United States
4 posted 2001-02-14 07:41 PM

Oh how I wish I could find a love half as beautiful as you two's. Congratulations on being who you each are individually and who you are together. Happy Valentine's day to my two best friends.

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