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0 posted 2011-02-12 05:21 PM


When i saw you i knew you were for me
I got a dozzen roses with a note that said plese love me
Than i got you a bunch of candy heats that all said be mine
Than i gave you love
When we went on our first date it was valintines day
So again i agot a dozzen roses with a bunch of candy harts that all said be mine for the note
than you gave me your love

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1 posted 2011-02-13 01:17 PM


What a sweet Valentine's day poem.  I noticed you don't mind mild critique - so if you are giving this away, you may wish to correct all the spelling errors    

When i saw you i knew you were for me
I got a dozzen roses with a note that said plese love me
Than i got you a bunch of candy heats that all said be mine
Than i gave you love
When we went on our first date it was valintines day
So again i agot a dozzen roses with a bunch of candy harts that all said be mine for the note
than you gave me your love

Have a great Valentine's Day ♥

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