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cherrylips
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 51
UK

0 posted 2002-12-04 08:02 AM

Children playing in the snow,
To each others houses families go.
People gathering to share in the fun,
Of Christmas times when they were young.

Oh the season is here so lets rejoice,
Its Christmas time you have no choice.
Don't be miserable and dont despair,
Remember that the festive spirit is in the air.

Its time for partys and lots of wine,
Cheer up, you're sure to have a good time.
Santa on his way and his helpers too,
So hurry up and shift those Christmas blues.

Presents sitting beneath the tree,
That are waiting there for you and me.
The music playing everywhere,
Times like this are oh so rare.

You get the chance just once a year,
so put on a smile and wip away that tear.
Once more I wish you Chrismtas cheer,
Once more I tell you the season is here!

earthman
Junior Member

since 2002-12-04

Posts 21

1 posted 2002-12-07 02:50 PM

Well Cherrylips or shall we change it to Cheerylips, nice piece all though it did get me a little down at first.

cherrylips
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 51
UK

2 posted 2002-12-08 10:27 AM

Thank you for your honesty I did feel a little down when I began this peom so it was a method of self motivation and I guess you must have felt that. As always constructive critism is welcome, dx

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-12-08 11:46 AM

CherryLips~

I see just the slight hues
of your lilting Christmas blues
Then I see tiny sips ...
of a Cheery smile upon your lips~

A delightfully inspirational read~
Have a beautiful day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2002-12-11 03:55 PM

a comforting piece. Nicely done, girl.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-12-12 10:47 AM

It was good to read that the Christmas blues gave way to the cheery reds and greens of the season!

~ Hoping that your Christmas will be very merry!

EA

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2002-12-18 02:38 PM

Absolutely!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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