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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-02-05 01:33 AM

A cut-out heart
and pasted lace
adornment of the sides...
simple words
and twists of fate
my symphony of sighs.

I chew my pen
in think again
for words to make you see
and crumple now
the paper heart
in my futility...

If I could
you know I would
hand it to you, still in beat...
with every verse
the longing's worse
each word, a drop of heart in bleed.

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2001-02-05 09:21 AM

I know.....sigh. Lovely, love poem, lovely lady.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-02-05 01:09 PM

Nice one here. I liked this but quite sad...

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2001-02-06 02:14 AM

How romantic... I loved this sweet poem. Keep up the good work.

JeremY

"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-02-06 07:03 AM

yer such a lovely Valentine ...
who could resist thy rhymes divine

and they ARE YA KNOW!!!

muchly

Tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I've found a love so strong
The sun and the moon look on in jealousy
~VH~

laryalee
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 352
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2001-02-06 10:17 AM

Marvellous write! "my symphony of sighs"...
so many stand-out lines....
Love it immensely!
Lary

BSC

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Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

6 posted 2001-02-06 05:44 PM

Straight from the heart ~ and so sadly lovely.... Bonnie

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

7 posted 2019-03-19 09:19 AM

I so very much enjoy reading your poetry

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