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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-02-05 01:33 AM

A cut-out heart
and pasted lace
adornment of the sides...
simple words
and twists of fate
my symphony of sighs.

I chew my pen
in think again
for words to make you see
and crumple now
the paper heart
in my futility...

If I could
you know I would
hand it to you, still in beat...
with every verse
the longing's worse
each word, a drop of heart in bleed.

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2001-02-05 09:21 AM

I know.....sigh. Lovely, love poem, lovely lady.  
Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2001-02-05 01:09 PM

Nice one here. I liked this but quite sad...

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
3 posted 2001-02-06 02:14 AM

How romantic... I loved this sweet poem. Keep up the good work.


"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-02-06 07:03 AM

yer such a lovely Valentine ...
who could resist thy rhymes divine

and they ARE YA KNOW!!!


Tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I've found a love so strong
The sun and the moon look on in jealousy

since 2000-06-19
Posts 352
Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2001-02-06 10:17 AM

Marvellous write!  "my symphony of sighs"...
so many stand-out lines....
Love it immensely!

Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
6 posted 2001-02-06 05:44 PM

Straight from the heart ~ and so sadly lovely.... Bonnie
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

7 posted 2019-03-19 09:19 AM

I so very much enjoy reading your poetry
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