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0 posted 2000-12-08 12:52 PM

Santa's Visit

Bbbuuurrrr!  Cold December morning
two weeks  from Christmas Day
and counting as I looked across the morning's darkness,
stars still twinkling on high
Jack Frost reflections
graced the grass
Then within a instant I saw a Red  flash!!
What?  Rubing my eyes with a second look,
how could this be, Santa's timing mistook?

I called out saying, "Santa, its me, a grown up, Come here".
Peeking from around a nearby tree
there he stood staring back at me,
a smile so wide he could hardly hide
rosey cheeks and red dress suit
all decked out in his new black boots
as he wabbled toward my door.

Come in Santa, lets talk awhile
still he continued with that hugh bright smile.
I warmed some milk and made a bother,
pleasing him as he yawned and swallowed.

Inquiring where his sleigh might be
he sheepishly looked up and grined at me,
learning Santa would not squeak,
I removed the ropes from around his feet.

Said, Santa now your free to go,
don't forget the date you'll need to show!
Remember the request I placed in your pouch?
Otherwise, your secrets out!

"Santa", I said, as he walked away,
"DECEMBER 25th, Santa, that's the DAY"!

[This message has been edited by kindasorta (edited 12-08-2000).]

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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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1 posted 2000-12-09 01:42 AM

Hi kindasorta
This is definatley charming isn't it? Good ol'e Santa, he is so adorable. You looked after him well.
Enjoyed it very much.

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2 posted 2000-12-09 01:54 PM

I thought this was great. A wonderful read.
Happy holidays to you!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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since 2000-09-18
Posts 247
3 posted 2000-12-16 08:22 PM


This was a cute, charming poem. I liked how you made Santa forgetful seeing how he is supposed to know everything (under God that is. You put me in the Holiday spirit. Thanks!   Take care.


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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 2001-12-08 06:23 PM

This was sooo cute....I like your little visit with Santa!!!!!

Merry Christmas!!!


[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 12-08-2001).]

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