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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Below the Firmament While watching clouds that cross the sky, A rising column caught my eye. Upon it's top, three figures seen. The one in front appears to lean Against a wall that is waist high. With arms braced, watches all go by. He looks so strong, I'm sure I can See the outline of a man, With two behind who also peer Across his shoulders, standing near. There is a feeling they're intent On what's below the firmament. It's just a cloud shape yet I see A similarity to He Who surely watches us with love From His view point high above! It doesn't fade, but then, at last, Another cloud mass slides on past To hide the shapes I focused on And when it passes, they are gone! I wonder if sometimes He stands To watch the vast parade of lands That travel round the sun each day And counts the ones who kneel to pray! Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (06-14-2002 08:08 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh Betty I'm sure He does and you have described this so well. Joyce |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Trillium, It's nice to know that another dreamer has their mind upon the clouds... After all we are to be looking up for our Salvation draws near. It is awe inspiring indeed to try and imagine how GOD must see the world. Very nicely written verse. GOD bless. -Bob |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ So very, very spiritually moving~ May He continue to bless you richly with poetic voice~ Thank you for sharing~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What lovely thoughts enter your daydreams as you search the wonders on high. Thanks for sharing them. Rae |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: Thanks for your comments. I really did see a cloud formation that looked as I described it. Really was awesome! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Bob: Thank you for your nice comments. The sky will likely be the first place His coming maifests itself. I can't even imagine what that will be like! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Thank you so much. I have always said that "God guides my pen" and I really feel that is so. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Rae: Glad to hear you enjoyed this and always appreciate your comments. Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Yes, oh, I think it is such a wonderful feeling to be able to have our own visions of what He look slike and to be entitled to our own view of how we believe in Him and what simple pleasures we love that He creates! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfulm sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: Nice to hear from you and you are always so generous with your comments. Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh there have have been times I thought I saw an angel in the clouds, and I too would like to think there is someone in the clouds watching us. This was lovely and spiritually moving. There is nothing means more to me than |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Mysteria: Thanks for responding. I'm a sky and cloud watcher and like you, often see things I think have a spiritual source. Betty Lou Hebert |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh what a truly awesome piece Betty ~ Looking forward to going out and doing some yard work, so I can look up and see what I can see. This is written with such a beautiful flow...Thanks, Bonnie |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Bonnie: I hope you see something inspiring! Thanks for commenting on my poem and such nice comments they are. Betty Lou Hebert |
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